Benchmarks / DeckBench / Lumio

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   Slide 1Polished
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   Slide 2Polished
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   Slide 3Polished The 9.8% data label sits on the top border of the plot and runs into the chart title.
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   Slide 4Polished
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   Slide 5Acceptable The right-hand column is text-heavy and repeats much of the title and chart; shorter supporting copy would make the comparison quicker to absorb.Both bars are the same colour, so the 41% non-completer bar is not emphasised.
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   Slide 6Polished All bars are the same colour; the setup/complexity and price bars could be highlighted to match the title.
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   Slide 7Polished
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   Slide 8Needs work The chart's long category labels collide beneath the bars, making the two options difficult to distinguish. Shorten the labels or wrap them into narrower, separate blocks.The two x-axis category labels collide: 'Onboarding programme (annual' runs into 'Price cut to £29 (annual revenue'.
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   Slide 9Acceptable The caveat panel is dense with paragraph-length bullets, requiring substantial reading on a closing decision slide.The green accent bar runs well below the end of the bullets, leaving empty space.