Benchmarks / DeckBench / Kestrel Logistics

Measured by Spring Prompt

Particle-1: On-time delivery: what is going wrong and what to fund

For the board and the company's three main investors. The decision it supports: whether to fund 40 more drivers or a trunk re-plan with 10 drivers.

Verdict
Not presentable
Deck rating
1,163
Slides
6 (brief: 5-8)
Design quality
0%

Why it is not presentable

  • Layout defect: something off the slide, colliding, too small or too faint to read
  • Did not give the analysis's recommendation within the first two slides
  • A slide the judges rated as needing work

In detail

  • Slide 1: Text too faint against its background (contrast 1.0:1) (5 times)
  • Slide 2: Text too faint against its background (contrast 1.0:1) (3 times)
  1. Slide 1 of Particle-1's deck
    Slide 1Download slide imageNeeds work No title or body text is visible; the slide consists of empty coloured blocks.No text or message provided
  2. Slide 2 of Particle-1's deck
    Slide 2Download slide imageNeeds work The title area, three cards and supporting panels contain no visible text.The row of three cards sits very close under the header and subtitle band, with almost no breathing room.
  3. Slide 3 of Particle-1's deck
    Slide 3Download slide imageNeeds work No visible headline or metric name explains what the percentages measure.The contract floor is drawn as a data series with point markers rather than a dashed or labelled reference line.
  4. Slide 4 of Particle-1's deck
    Slide 4Download slide imageNeeds work The title bar is blank, and no visible text establishes what the category percentages refer to.The orange header block in the right panel spills past the right edge of the content column.
  5. Slide 5 of Particle-1's deck
    Slide 5Download slide imageNeeds work The title bar is blank; the readable cost table has no visible headline stating the intended takeaway.The two-row table leaves a large empty gap before the dark block below it, which looks unbalanced.
  6. Slide 6 of Particle-1's deck
    Slide 6Download slide imageNeeds work No title, body text or labels are visible anywhere on the slide.The orange block butts directly against the title block with no gap, so the two collide.