Claude Haiku 4.5: Responsive repairs: in-house team or renewed contract

For the board of trustees of a housing association, including two tenant board members. The decision it supports: whether to approve £1.2m to set up an in-house repairs team or renew the contract.

Verdict: Not presentable
Deck rating: 635
Slides: 6 (brief: 6-9)
Design quality: 42%

Why it is not presentable

Did not give the analysis's recommendation within the first two slides
Made a material claim the analysis does not support
A slide the judges rated as needing work

In detail

Slide 6: “Reduces backlog and completion time as we recruit and train staff” is not supported by the analysis.
Slide 6: “Speaker notes: the backlog has grown by 7% in real terms (the 7% is demand growth; the backlog more than doubled)” is not supported by the analysis.
Slide 6: “The backlog has grown by 7% in real terms” is not supported by the analysis.

Slide 1Needs work The title is too large for the header band; its second line is visibly cut off.Second line of the title ('renewed contract') is cut off by the bottom edge of the title banner
Slide 2Polished Y-axis has no label or units
Slide 3Acceptable The statistic cards contain substantial empty space, making the layout feel oversized.Two-line title sits tight against the bottom of the banner
Slide 4Acceptable A large vertical gap separates the table from the explanatory bullets.Descender of 'y' in 'years' is clipped at the bottom edge of the title banner
Slide 5Needs work The chart title and the 1870 value label collide.Chart title 'Formal repair complaints' collides with the '1870' data label
Slide 6Acceptable The oversized content panel leaves a large empty area beneath the bullets.Descenders of 'g' in 'bridging' are clipped at the bottom edge of the title banner