Kimi K3: Responsive repairs: in-house team or renewed contract
For the board of trustees of a housing association, including two tenant board members. The decision it supports: whether to approve £1.2m to set up an in-house repairs team or renew the contract.
Verdict
Not presentable
Deck rating
1,255
Slides
8 (brief: 6-9)
Design quality
88%
Why it is not presentable
Layout defect: something off the slide, colliding, too small or too faint to read
In detail
Slide 1: shape 1 extends past the slide edge.
Slide 2: text 5: 11.5 pt body text.
Slide 2: text 9: 11.5 pt body text.
Slide 2: text 13: 11 pt body text.
Slide 8: shape 1 extends past the slide edge.
Slide 1Polished
Slide 2PolishedThe title is a topic label ('The decision before the board today'). The recommendation in the teal box would work better as the takeaway title.
Slide 3Polished
Slide 4AcceptableThe right-hand explanation is text-heavy, with several multiline bullets that slow scanning.The October counting change behind the sharp jump is not marked on the chart. Viewers must read the caption and bullets to understand the step.
Slide 5AcceptableThe large teal '92%' on the right competes with the title's 64% complaints message, and it argues the opposite way at first glance.The right bar (1870) extends past the top of the y-axis limit (1750), making the chart look broken.
Slide 6PolishedThe left bar (4.3) exceeds the maximum tick on the y-axis (4.0), extending out of the standard chart area.
Slide 7PolishedThe step cards are much taller than their text, leaving their lower halves empty.