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Measured by Spring Prompt

Muse Ember: On-time delivery: what is going wrong and what to fund

For the board and the company's three main investors. The decision it supports: whether to fund 40 more drivers or a trunk re-plan with 10 drivers.

Verdict
Not presentable
Deck rating
1,193
Slides
7 (brief: 5-8)
Design quality
71%

Why it is not presentable

  • Layout defect: something off the slide, colliding, too small or too faint to read

In detail

  • Slide 1: A body text box set at 10 pt, too small to read
  • Slide 1: 3 body text boxes set at 11 pt, too small to read
  • Slide 1: 2 text boxes set at 8 pt, too small to read
  • Slide 2: A text box set at 9 pt, too small to read
  • Slide 2: A text box set at 8 pt, too small to read
  1. Slide 1 of Muse Ember's deck
    Slide 1Download slide imagePolished
  2. Slide 2 of Muse Ember's deck
    Slide 2Download slide imagePolished The 93% floor is drawn as a data series with markers at every week; a plain dashed reference line would read more clearly
  3. Slide 3 of Muse Ember's deck
    Slide 3Download slide imageAcceptable The stated 93% contract floor is not marked on the chart, making above-versus-below-floor comparisons less immediate.Y-axis runs from 0–100%, which compresses the 89–96% differences so the bars look almost equal and undercut the title
  4. Slide 4 of Muse Ember's deck
    Slide 4Download slide imagePolished The late-trunking bar is the same colour as the others; it should be emphasised as the key bar
  5. Slide 5 of Muse Ember's deck
    Slide 5Download slide imageAcceptable The title names the topic rather than stating the conclusion.Title is a topic label ('Two proposals compared'); the takeaway sits in the bottom bar instead
  6. Slide 6 of Muse Ember's deck
    Slide 6Download slide imageAcceptable The oversized white funding card has substantial unused space below its content, leaving the composition top-heavy.Text in the white card is crammed into the top half, leaving the bottom half empty
  7. Slide 7 of Muse Ember's deck
    Slide 7Download slide imageAcceptable The slide functions as a reference page rather than communicating one main takeaway.Large empty area below the table