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Measured by Spring Prompt

Gemini 4 Carbon: On-time delivery: what is going wrong and what to fund

For the board and the company's three main investors. The decision it supports: whether to fund 40 more drivers or a trunk re-plan with 10 drivers.

Verdict
Not presentable
Deck rating
1,021
Slides
6 (brief: 5-8)
Design quality
58%

Why it is not presentable

  • Layout defect: something off the slide, colliding, too small or too faint to read
  • Made a material claim the analysis does not support
  • A slide the judges rated as needing work

In detail

  • Slide 2: “Preston, Coventry and Swindon all held above 94.5% throughout.” is not supported by the analysis.
  • Slide 2: “Coventry and Swindon both remained above 94.3% in all weeks.” is not supported by the analysis.
  • Slide 5: “Trunk re-plan + 10 drivers fixes 60% of root causes.” is not supported by the analysis.
  • Slide 6: “Recruiting 10 drivers dedicated to Doncaster and Stoke closes local driver shortages.” is not supported by the analysis.
  • Slide 5: “Trunk re-plan + 10 drivers fixes 60% of root causes” is not supported by the analysis.
  • Slide 2: Two text boxes overlap
  • Slide 3: Two text boxes overlap
  • Slide 4: Two text boxes overlap
  1. Slide 1 of Gemini 4 Carbon's deck
    Slide 1Download slide imagePolished
  2. Slide 2 of Gemini 4 Carbon's deck
    Slide 2Download slide imageAcceptable The subtitle sits very close to the two-line headline, making the header feel compressed.The two-line title runs straight into the subtitle with almost no gap ('Stoke' nearly touches the subtitle line), so the header looks cramped
  3. Slide 3 of Gemini 4 Carbon's deck
    Slide 3Download slide imagePolished The title wraps to two lines and the descenders of 'shortages' collide with the subtitle text
  4. Slide 4 of Gemini 4 Carbon's deck
    Slide 4Download slide imageNeeds work The title wraps to two lines and 'coping' overlaps the subtitle textSubtitle text overlaps with the main title text.
  5. Slide 5 of Gemini 4 Carbon's deck
    Slide 5Download slide imageNeeds work The table, option cards and chart repeat the same comparison, making the slide unnecessarily dense.The title wraps to two lines and the descender of 'year' collides with the subtitle text
  6. Slide 6 of Gemini 4 Carbon's deck
    Slide 6Download slide imagePolished The three cards are tall and their lower halves are empty, which wastes space