MiniMax M3.1 Flash: Manchester store investment review

For the board of directors (non-executives and the chief executive). The decision it supports: whether to approve £480k of capital for a Manchester store.

Verdict: Not presentable
Deck rating: 1,300
Slides: 6 (brief: 5-8)
Design quality: 58%

Why it is not presentable

Layout defect: something off the slide, colliding, too small or too faint to read
A slide the judges rated as needing work

In detail

Slide 1: A body text box set at 11 pt, too small to read
Slide 1: A text box set at 9 pt, too small to read
Slide 2: A text box set at 9 pt, too small to read

Slide 1Download slide imagePolished
Slide 2Download slide imageNeeds work The adjusted run-rate value wraps within the number, leaving the final zero on a separate line. Widen the value label so approximately £2,380 reads on one line.The adjusted run-rate value label '≈£2,380' wraps onto two lines ('≈£2,38' / '0'), so the key number on the slide is broken
Slide 3Download slide imageAcceptable A large empty band separates the table from the payback callouts, making the layout feel disconnected and top-heavy.A large empty band between the table and the summary cards leaves the layout unbalanced
Slide 4Download slide imageNeeds work The Harrogate category label breaks mid-word, with its final letter on a separate line. Widen the label area or shift the bars right to keep category names intact.The bar label 'Harrogate' breaks mid-word ('Harrogat' / 'e')
Slide 5Download slide imagePolished
Slide 6Download slide imagePolished