DeepSeek V4 Pro 0423: Manchester store investment review

For the board of directors (non-executives and the chief executive). The decision it supports: whether to approve £480k of capital for a Manchester store.

Verdict: Not presentable
Deck rating: 615
Slides: 7 (brief: 5-8)
Design quality: 29%

Why it is not presentable

Made a material claim the analysis does not support
A slide the judges rated as needing work

In detail

Slide 4: “The 45-seat unit half the capital cost gets to 30 months.” is not supported by the analysis.
Slide 4: “The 45-seat unit half the capital cost gets to 30 months” is not supported by the analysis.

Slide 1Polished
Slide 2Needs work A missing-character box interrupts '36-month' in the left-hand explanation.Missing-glyph box appears in '36?month' (the non-breaking hyphen does not render)
Slide 3Needs work Missing-character boxes appear in the title, chart categories, body text and footnote.Missing-glyph boxes in the title ('Pop?up'), the axis labels and the body text ('pop?up', 'run?rate')
Slide 4Needs work Missing-character boxes interrupt 'run-rate' in both table rows and in the explanation, and '45-seat' in the explanation.Missing-glyph boxes in 'run?rate' (table and body) and in '45?seat'
Slide 5Needs work Redundant 0% labels between the bars create clutter and suggest unexplained additional data.The chart is built as two series, which produces spurious '0%' labels and bars offset from the category ticks
Slide 6Needs work Missing-character boxes interrupt '70-seat' and '45-seat' in the first two bullets.Missing-glyph boxes in '70?seat' and '45?seat'
Slide 7Polished