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Gemini 4 Hydrogen: On-time delivery: what is going wrong and what to fund

For the board and the company's three main investors. The decision it supports: whether to fund 40 more drivers or a trunk re-plan with 10 drivers.

Verdict
Not presentable
Deck rating
1,147
Slides
6 (brief: 5-8)
Design quality
75%

Why it is not presentable

  • Layout defect: something off the slide, colliding, too small or too faint to read
  • Made a material claim the analysis does not support

In detail

  • Slide 4: “Trunk re-plan + 10 drivers fixes both bottlenecks; directly resolves late trunking (38%) and targeted driver shortages at Doncaster and Stoke.” is not supported by the analysis.
  • Slide 4: “Trunk re-plan + 10 drivers fixes both bottlenecks ... Directly resolves late trunking (38%)” is not supported by the analysis.
  • Slide 2: Text too faint against its background (contrast 2.1:1)
  • Slide 3: Text too faint against its background (contrast 2.1:1)
  • Slide 4: Text too faint against its background (contrast 2.1:1)
  • Slide 5: Text too faint against its background (contrast 2.1:1)
  1. Slide 1 of Gemini 4 Hydrogen's deck
    Slide 1Download slide imagePolished
  2. Slide 2 of Gemini 4 Hydrogen's deck
    Slide 2Download slide imageAcceptable The four grey depot series are difficult to distinguish quickly and require repeated reference to the legend; direct labels would improve scanning.Swindon, Coventry and Preston are near-identical light greys, so the legend cannot tell them apart.
  3. Slide 3 of Gemini 4 Hydrogen's deck
    Slide 3Download slide imagePolished All bars are the same navy; the late-trunking and driver-shortage bars could be highlighted to match the callouts.
  4. Slide 4 of Gemini 4 Hydrogen's deck
    Slide 4Download slide imageAcceptable The title wraps with only 'cost' on the second line, leaving it cramped against the divider.The title wraps to a second line, leaving 'cost' orphaned and colliding with the divider rule.
  5. Slide 5 of Gemini 4 Hydrogen's deck
    Slide 5Download slide imageAcceptable Both panels rely on lengthy bullet text, so the supporting argument takes sustained reading rather than a quick scan.The right card is text-heavy, and its lower half is empty.
  6. Slide 6 of Gemini 4 Hydrogen's deck
    Slide 6Download slide imagePolished The title wraps, leaving '(£0.4m/yr)' orphaned on the second line.