Benchmarks / DeckBench / Northgate Homes

Measured by Spring Prompt

Muse Ember: Responsive repairs: in-house team or renewed contract

For the board of trustees of a housing association, including two tenant board members. The decision it supports: whether to approve £1.2m to set up an in-house repairs team or renew the contract.

Verdict
Not presentable
Deck rating
1,193
Slides
8 (brief: 6-9)
Design quality
69%

Why it is not presentable

  • Layout defect: something off the slide, colliding, too small or too faint to read
  • A slide the judges rated as needing work

In detail

  • Slide 2: 2 text boxes set at 9 pt, too small to read
  • Slide 3: 2 text boxes set at 9 pt, too small to read
  • Slide 4: 2 text boxes set at 9 pt, too small to read
  • Slide 5: Chart labels at 9 pt, too small to read
  • Slide 5: A text box set at 9 pt, too small to read
  1. Slide 1 of Muse Ember's deck
    Slide 1Download slide imagePolished
  2. Slide 2 of Muse Ember's deck
    Slide 2Download slide imageAcceptable Both option panels have large unused lower areas; a more compact comparison would improve balance and bring the costs into sharper focus.Title is a topic label ('The decision before the board') rather than a takeaway
  3. Slide 3 of Muse Ember's deck
    Slide 3Download slide imagePolished
  4. Slide 4 of Muse Ember's deck
    Slide 4Download slide imagePolished
  5. Slide 5 of Muse Ember's deck
    Slide 5Download slide imagePolished
  6. Slide 6 of Muse Ember's deck
    Slide 6Download slide imageNeeds work The orange summary beneath the bar chart is partially covered by the teal bottom banner, cutting off the text.Chart caption '1,140 → 1,870 — 730 more complaints, up 64%' collides with the bottom banner and is cut off
  7. Slide 7 of Muse Ember's deck
    Slide 7Download slide imageAcceptable The table, chart and bottom cards repeat the same figures, adding visual bulk without much additional explanation.Large empty gap between the table and the explanatory note in the left column
  8. Slide 8 of Muse Ember's deck
    Slide 8Download slide imageAcceptable The recommendation is repeated in the subtitle, banner and approval list, making the slide more text-heavy than necessary.Title is a topic label ('Recommendation') rather than a takeaway